ATOMIC SUPLEX
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Just watched to the end.a fair criticism. I do wonder if the project would have worked better as a short series with a focussed one episode per band.
but not a fatal flaw. still an interesting doc to watch.
The point of girl bands and babies was interesting, but they revisited it at least three separate times because they kept all the bands stories totally separate. This is one of the reasons it felt like it kept covering the same ground.
Many of the subjects/issues raised were bigger than groups specifically from Scotland or specifically for groups made exclusively up of women.
The preachy end cards over the kids was excruciating. There is a clear and definite message within the stories that is worth highlighting. Chucking that bit on the end (like a Live Aid plea after comedy sketch) was not the way to do it.
Overall it was pretty disappointing. A couple of interesting insights, but ultimately a lack of accuracy and depth as it struggles to circumvent parts of the story to fit the narrative. The individual segments are shot and recorded nicely but it's a disjointed and very armature in it's execution.
I think you are right that it might have made more sense as three grouped (time based?) episodes. Trouble is that I think it was originally made as an independent film. This is maybe why the wobbly narrative wasn't questioned and eradicated by a writer, edit producer, producer, exec producer, editor, or commissioner. It seems like a very obvious and jarring schoolboy (/schoolgirl) error.