I think his first law is actually spot on.
Yeah I agree I think that bit was right. Reducing fighting oppression to getting your mates to modify their behaviours in certain radical spaces. Individualising things that are structural - with a bit of lipservice that gets paid to structural analysis here and there amongst more thoughtful advocates - but the end result is usually limited to stopping someone appearing in certain radical spaces, banning certain words in those spaces, calling out opponents for using those words in the media etc it's all very individualistic. And narrow. It looks like in-group etiquette rather than an attempt to tackle oppression in a systemic way.
But I don't think that's a particularly original observation, and I definitely don't think he's expressed himself very clearly. If one of the main critiques of the liberal neo-anarchists is that they have this terrible language then making that sort of point whilst using his own sort of academic jargon undermines it a lot.
And the stuff about Brand is terrible too. I'm not sold on Brand at all to be honest and I don't have any problem with people putting him under scrutiny. I think that being critical over his sexual politics, or his previous endorsements of David Icke, is a much healthier response to Brand than of getting carried away with the fact a celebrity has expressed an extremely vague interest in revolution. And what "demolition" of Paxman? And since when was Paxman this giant intellectual figure to be toppled? Nah I don't get any of that.
I noticed a real Activist describe the article on twitter as "the nadir of MRA leftism" which is incredibly disingenuous and unfair on Fisher.