yea you said you would do a critique that i wouldant like one bit.. thats kinda negative especially from somebody who cant rhyme one damn verse.
the strange part of all this is im asking you to insult the shit outta me in rhyme form and for some bloody reason you wont do it..
Why would she want to?
Only this morning, you were raw furious and spitting with rage because people were insulting you. As in, full-on, bouncing-off-the-walls-and-ceilings ballistic. With threats of physical violence. And all kinds of allusions to all the information and muck you were gathering on the people who
dared to insult you.
Now, because you've been pulled up for being aggressive towards someone who had originally offered to help, it's all a game, and the only way that anyone can be a good poet is to 'play your game,' to your rules, and insult you in rhyme - which is
nothing like the poetry that Soj has posted. It's not the ethos of Soj's poetry, afaict; it's not the style; it doesn't reflect any of the content - not that I saw, at least. Which was emotionally engaged, reflective, and thought provoking.
Like, insulting you is not a simple thing, Meth! What's the best outcome? Someone 'wins' at insulting someone who's keen to point out he's mentally ill? Someone wins at picking you apart? At fucking you off? At putting you down?
I can fully understand why that might represent a poisoned chalice!
have i got permission to put ya fuckin poem up to critique?
If you do, you blow her anonymity. Soj's poems are also online. I don't know how much that matters to Soj; I know how much it'd matter to you, if someone blew your anonymity. And I know that last night, you were refusing to post up anything that you said had been sent to you, under any circumstances, because you were - apparently - desperately keen not to break the FAQs, under any circumstances, ever.
you need to chill and lol more... its a fuckin sport soj, its like boxing only your throwing verbal blows instead of physical blows and its massivly popular(just not on here lol)
Soj offered to provide you with a critique. From her angle. As someone who's won prizes for her poetry. Which is not the same kinda style as yours.
You, quickly, insulted her, for not getting back to you pretty much immediately.
The 'poetry' you're describing is just your take on 'poetry,' meth. If someone else doesn't buy into that - and it doesn't look as if Soj does - then having a go because they won't slate you (in what is, basically, a no-win game) just isn't on.
bad mannord arrogant little fuck wit is more insult than i have done to you.
tbf, in context, that struck me as an eminently reasonable description. You were being bad mannered. You were being arrogant. Perhaps 'little fuckwit' was open to more interpretation - but - in context, and given how utterly rude you were being after someone had offered to help, because things weren't delivered immediately / to your schedule - that doesn't strike me as an uncomplicated insult. Someone offered to help; you were a dick to them because they didn't respond as soon as you wanted them to.
you aint no poet then coz they 2 of the most important things. along with the wordplay.
Brain-clever isn't the same as heart-clever, Meth.
its harder to rhyme consistantly with long verses than it is to do what i see in yours. if you aint gonna rhyme its more like creative writing than poetry.
How long do you seriously think each of you takes over your poems?
It's not all about showing off, Meth. It's not all about rhyming. God only knows, it isn't all about rhyming.
(dont worry i wont)
((my comprehension))
