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Blagsta said:
you've been a right cunt to soj
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how? she said i wuldant like her feedback... ages ago eventually to took one of them and did her critic thing apart from that she has bee equally if not more rude to me than i have to her. i been putting 'lol's in to try and humer it up abit.
 
@fridgemagnet

sojourner said:
You know what? I spent all yesterday morning critiquing one of those poems for you. I put a lot of time, effort, and concentration into it, as a FAVOUR.

After having told you I was busy, and had other stuff to do, but did give you an idea of when they would be done, this is what I see on the public thread. You, behaving like a spoilt little cunt.

After you mithering the living FUCK out of me to do it, I've heard absolutely nothing back from you since yesterday lunchtime when I sent it to you. Not even one word of thanks, nothing.

Stuff it up your arse methlab, you are one ungrateful fuck.
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is this not abuse?
 
METH LAB said:
how? she said i wuldant like her feedback... ages ago eventually to took one of them and did her critic thing apart from that she has bee equally if not more rude to me than i have to her. i been putting 'lol's in to try and humer it up abit.
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You've slagged off her writing, told her she can't write, sent her 5 poems when she requested 2, didn't thank her for her input, in fact just insulted her when she took her time to read and respond to your stuff. Yet you're the wounded party?
 
I gotta say a shout out to Meth Lab
writting poetry he thinks he's fab
I read his lyrics and I think its drab
dissin peeps and and boastin drugs he grabs

life is shit, is the tone he throws
life on time is what he borrows
threats of an end is what he shows
drinking poison to drown his sorrows

i've been here long and seen the story
binges of drugs and Jackonory
time to get a grip and face reality
its not a dig, it jus what we all see

i'm gonna sign out wi Peace n Respect
no hard feelings or any regret
listen up meth, and pay attention
cause if you dun, RIP will mention

:D
 
Blagsta said:
You've slagged off her writing, told her she can't write, sent her 5 poems when she requested 2, didn't thank her for her input, in fact just insulted her when she took her time to read and respond to your stuff. Yet you're the wounded party?
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i never said she cant but its my right as a human being to admit that it was ok..better than anythng yu could do for sure but shwing me 5 poems and dig a very basic feedback on one of mine i dont think amounts to the leval of abuse im getting.
 
METH LAB said:
i never said she cant but its my right as a human being to admit that it was ok..better than anythng yu could do for sure but shwing me 5 poems and dig a very basic feedback on one of mine i dont think amounts to the leval of abuse im getting.
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You're even getting little digs in at me now! Have a fucking word.
 
Addy said:
I gotta say a shout out to Meth Lab
writting poetry he thinks he's fab
I read his lyrics and I think its drab
dissin peeps and and boastin drugs he grabs

life is shit, is the tone he throws
life on time is what he borrows
threats of an end is what he shows
drinking poison to drown his sorrows

i've been here long and seen the story
binges of drugs and Jackonory
time to get a grip and face reality
its not a dig, it jus what we all see

i'm gonna sign out wi Peace n Respect
no hard feelings or any regret
listen up meth, and pay attention
cause if you dun, RIP will mention

:D
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that was brilliaint addy...keep it comming :cool:
 
Blagsta said:
You're even getting little digs in at me now! Have a fucking word.
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you been havaing digz at me all fuckin day, and last night.

you have a word..your the fuckas mental health worker..ohh i remember we supposed to fix ourselves aint we since we(the mentally ill) got broken heads instead of broken legs.
 
that's what you want isn't it? For everyone to say "fuck off meth", so you can then justify being the victim and justify another relapse.
 
Blagsta said:
that's what you want isn't it? For everyone to say "fuck off meth", so you can then justify being the victim and justify another relapse.
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?? what the fuck are you fucking talking about?? go smoke a fuckin cigarete or somehing what the hell is wrong with you? alwys fuckin case-sudieing me piss off allready. i forgot what i was gonna do now :mad:
 
winner today i reckons is plaiddragon..hope i got that right blagsta interupted my train of thought.

im gonna give addy second and myself 3rd on todays..tar is progressing.

need some more judges. thats IMO of todays lot.
 
Blagsta said:
There's got to be some reason why you're being a cunt to everyone.
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everone? what diskomerit and butchers? and a little bit at soj and she fired much more back.

3 fuckin people? make it 4 if you wanna cunt i mean count yaself.

stop case studying me its pissing me off
 
METH LAB said:
winner today i reckons is plaiddragon..hope i got that right blagsta interupted my train of thought.

im gonna give addy second and myself 3rd on todays..tar is progressing.

need some more judges. thats IMO of todays lot.
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You're not allowed to vote for yourself :facepalm: ;)
 
You were a right dick on that politics thread btw, and in fact really very offensive - as soon as it was suggested that butchers was an alcoholic you piled in with the insults and dismissive remarks on that basis.
 
a plea for calm (and mild reproach)

-----

If ever meth requests a favour
decline, lest you attract his havers
and become the target for a lash
of insults; like he hates thy neighbour

so whatever happened to PEACE and love?
'cos harmony's the making of
communities where random souls
connect to form a poet club

;)
 
@fridgemagnet
he's been callin me all kinds of shit for years i dont ever bother reporting abuse you must have missed the bits when they were calling me fucked in the head, thick as fuck, tory(i assume thats an insult ii dont really do polotics)

they start..i respond. anyne would. there was an entire bunch coming out the wood work once diskomerit and aprans butcherstarted thrwing abuse at me constantly.
 
No, it was you. All those things you said, you said them. You posted a silly comment about how it was fine to dodge tax, you got called on it, then you went nuts. Not only did you try to insult people on the basis that they were alcoholics (and nobody had a go at you for your situation despite what you've repeatedly claimed afterwards) you also made personal physical threats numerous times.
 
oh wel, im not gonna change your mind am i.

i aint going trough the thread from pos 275 to quote every fuckin abusive post coz it would take ages coz there was so many of them.

i might add again that this wasover woith untill mrs.q had to go bring it up again
 
Mrs Q posted less than 20 minutes after you had laid into soj, meth. That's hardly "bringing it back up again".
 
edit: you know, actually, this is just escalating stuff. Sorry to have to stop interacting with somebody as if they might pay attention to what you said, but no, it's a waste of time.
 
Bunfight

I slept and turned that night

It was a long sleep

The morning log-in was as damp as it was crisp with sober guilt

I gave a fuck for a short while

Then I read Stanley's posts

Bunfight
 
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