DotCommunist
So many particulars. So many questions.
shit, forgot to confiscate the dirk. I await a shanking
poetry competition?
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Tar you on one today and raxy.. lets rip the piss out of 24/7 dopeheads, just for the hell of it.
UK-421
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tar your on a mission today
and so is raxy in his own silly way
if only i had more of a vocabulary
i could branch out abit more rapity
look, tars the fuckin chemist
im just the cook
I'll watch the TV
tars gonna read a book
that was a bloody shit paraniod graph
but im just having a bit of a laff
get it together LAB fucks sake maybe a joint or two
always a good way to make me wanna reach for a brew
tar you write songs
without havin to smoke bongs
smash those ultra-pro weed zombies with lyrical bombs
make a mockery of the monotony
of a dope head in denial
make a mockery of that dope head
that hassant showerd in a while
bangin on about its all harmless and a cure for cancer to,
you ever notice 'em shaking? i fuckin do
rocky fuckin resin full of oil henna and tar
i know for damn sure you can play the guitar tar
so write them lyrics up and make them chuffing songs
be productive unlike a stoned out chuffing mong
im starting to sound anti-weed thats realy not the case,
just cant stand those fucking canna addicts telling everyone its safe
they forget what they on about and just stare into space
some of them also get a psychotic little taste
when i was on the ward
from no sleep and loads of base
most the people in there had been a cannabis smokin case
i found it odd at first
but now i know the score
that over-sexed modified weed
can bring ya demons to the front door
question there dependance and they act just the same,
as a heroin addicted benzo head they lose the plot and go insane
to fuckin doped up to realise what they doing
looking like doped up drug addicts only without the withdrawl speweing
now matter how bloody obvious of potential negative effects from weed
they always say its something else other than the THC
They blame the oxygen levals in the room
they blame the crop times and the grow room
they blame the soil the shit was grown in,
desperatly moaning,
that it could not be
no way not my harmless weed
a powefull psychoactive
couldant possibly be the cause,
of them getting right paranoid
curtians shut lock all the doors!
take this little didty over to uk4fuckin20
at least 800 of 'em armed and ready
they can grow but they really just dont know
how the shit works and..
shit what was i saying?
oh yea something to do with blow
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they would love that over at bore20 i reckons lol..im still on a perma ban for saying weed has negative effects on alot of people. they wont have it though..even the ones that know weed kicks off there bi-polar, they stll blame the compost and the nutriants or some other bollox.
UK-421
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tar your on a mission today
and so is raxy in his own silly way
if only i had more of a vocabulary
i could branch out abit more rapity
look, tars the fuckin chemist
im just the cook
I'll watch the TV
tars gonna read a book
that was a bloody shit paraniod graph
but im just having a bit of a laff
get it together LAB fucks sake maybe a joint or two
always a good way to make me wanna reach for a brew
tar you write songs
without havin to smoke bongs
smash those ultra-pro weed zombies with lyrical bombs
make a mockery of the monotony
of a dope head in denial
make a mockery of that dope head
that hassant showerd in a while
bangin on about its all harmless and a cure for cancer to,
you ever notice 'em shaking? i fuckin do
rocky fuckin resin full of oil henna and tar
i know for damn sure you can play the guitar tar
so write them lyrics up and make them chuffing songs
be productive unlike a stoned out chuffing mong
im starting to sound anti-weed thats realy not the case,
just cant stand those fucking canna addicts telling everyone its safe
they forget what they on about and just stare into space
some of them also get a psychotic little taste
when i was on the ward
from no sleep and loads of base
most the people in there had been a cannabis smokin case
i found it odd at first
but now i know the score
that over-sexed modified weed
can bring ya demons to the front door
question there dependance and they act just the same,
as a heroin addicted benzo head they lose the plot and go insane
to fuckin doped up to realise what they doing
looking like doped up drug addicts only without the withdrawl speweing
now matter how bloody obvious of potential negative effects from weed
they always say its something else other than the THC
They blame the oxygen levals in the room
they blame the crop times and the grow room
they blame the soil the shit was grown in,
desperatly moaning,
that it could not be
no way not my harmless weed
a powefull psychoactive
couldant possibly be the cause,
of them getting right paranoid
curtians shut lock all the doors!
take this little didty over to uk4fuckin20
at least 800 of 'em armed and ready
they can grow but they really just dont know
how the shit works and..
shit what was i saying?
oh yea something to do with blow
..............................................................
they would love that over at bore20 i reckons lol..im still on a perma ban for saying weed has negative effects on alot of people. they wont have it though..even the ones that know weed kicks off there bi-polar, they stll blame the compost and the nutriants or some other bollox.
sheothebudworths
Up the bum - no babies!!!
READ IT, Meth...just fucking click on the link and READ IT...the quotes from you AND the replies from mrs quoad. Read it properly! TAKE IT IN.
mrs quoad's last post -
http://www.urban75.net/forums/threads/poetry-competition.284089/page-5#post-11282058
(Jesus...wtf is up with the new 'Reply' function...it's impossible to quote threads which have existing quotes in them...and C & P doesn't work either!
)
mrs quoad's last post -
http://www.urban75.net/forums/threads/poetry-competition.284089/page-5#post-11282058
(Jesus...wtf is up with the new 'Reply' function...it's impossible to quote threads which have existing quotes in them...and C & P doesn't work either!
)DotCommunist
So many particulars. So many questions.
in epically self-absorbed shit news I need muse. Got one. Its that or ekphrastik, and by god am I sick of that form. It isn't like I was much cop at it anyway
FridgeMagnet
Administrator
You've been extremely rude on this thread to someone who has been trying to help you. Now people who mean well to you are imploring you to listen and stop it.
It's up to you whether you pay attention to this of course, but you're in danger of losing a lot of goodwill here.
N.B. The general understanding of a "poetry competition" is not some sort of shit "rap battle".
It's up to you whether you pay attention to this of course, but you're in danger of losing a lot of goodwill here.
N.B. The general understanding of a "poetry competition" is not some sort of shit "rap battle".
sheothebudworths
Up the bum - no babies!!!
What were you expecting to happen?
What *education*?
Do you just mean you were expecting her to say everything was great and leave it there?
Why ask for her opinion...for her to educate you....if you don't value her own work anyway (cos I'm quite sure she wouldn't give a fuck if you didn't)?
she been rude to me, more so ide reckon
you mean soj? where have i been rude? she's telling me to fuck off, calling me a prick, saying she smarter wiser etc.. all i did was a half ass couple paragraphs on her.
Thats why ive said over and over that any style is welcome, soj gets to call me a prick, tells me to fuck off..im then expected to take that abuse coz i made a jokey poem that i was hoping she wuld have a stab back..ya know..for fun like. *shrug* no biggie.
i asked for some bits and bobs on differant styles though she's not that good so was a waste of time askin her..meanwhile she's been abusing me ever since.
same with mrs.Q
I choke poets like asphixiatin, when im sranggling my own throat masterbating.
heh
make your mind up
(or are you on a wind-up?)
you gotta have 'some' rhyming in poetry otherwise its creative writing which is differant.
sheothebudworths
Up the bum - no babies!!!
No you don't, Meth.
sheothebudworths
Up the bum - no babies!!!
Don't fucking ask, then.
sheothebudworths
Up the bum - no babies!!!
And READ mrs q's post again. READ IT.
Come on, Meth, ffs...sort ya head out, eh!
Read it all again, but don't be looking for insults that aren't there....assume this time that soj and mrs q were trying to be HELPFUL...cos they fucking well WERE!
Come on, Meth, ffs...sort ya head out, eh!
Read it all again, but don't be looking for insults that aren't there....assume this time that soj and mrs q were trying to be HELPFUL...cos they fucking well WERE!
beesonthewhatnow
going deaf for a living
Poetry has to rhyme?
Really?
Really?
Blagsta
Minimum cage, maximum cage
Says who?
READ IT, Meth...just fucking click on the link and READ IT...the quotes from you AND the replies from mrs quoad. Read it properly! TAKE IT IN.
mrs quoad's last post -
http://www.urban75.net/forums/threads/poetry-competition.284089/page-5#post-11282058
(Jesus...wtf is up with the new 'Reply' function...it's impossible to quote threads which have existing quotes in them...and C & P doesn't work either!
allready read and im not replying coz you all seem to think soj has done me some MASIVE favour.. she gave an opinion she didnt educate shit and aint as good as i thought she might be so i made a couple paragraphs to maybe kick off some competition but instead she just tells me to fuck off and all sorts of other abuse.
mrs.q is ignore now i got no interest in that person, never makes fuck all sense anyway. off her fake tits as follio said once lol
i did read it but i dunno why he trying to put the jimmy carr thread in the same league as this one...ive asked for anything goes, so anything goes on this thread. you can compete, or just write some shit.. simples. the jimmy car one ivebeen called fucked in the head, tory, fuckin thick as shit, and back again..by numerous people simply coz i had a drunken opinion (and actually made it clear if you read my first post on therre 275 i think and onwards its the diskomerit and butchers insulting the fuck out of me..
Blagsta
Minimum cage, maximum cage
you're rapidly losing the good will people have towards you
i reckon you do..all styles welcome though
well i wont now but i didnt know how gash she was untill asking the first time jeezs bloody christ, how was i supposed to know she gonna take the fuckin verse in completaly the wrong way... thats her issue not mine
Blagsta
Minimum cage, maximum cage
Never is, is it.
quimcunx
imprimeo, lamino, distribuo
good will? are you for real ive had nothing but abuseall last night, and now today i aint eve done anything today apart from leave that other thread alone, ui had a chat with orang and just left it ever since.. y'all are the ones that aint leting it go now
sometimes it is..not this time
alot a fuckin biggets round here if you dare to have an emotional problem.
Blagsta
Minimum cage, maximum cage
Have a word with yourself. You're being extremely aggressive and rude, then acting all innocent when pulled up on it. Take a break from the internet mate, its not doing you any favours.
so soj can be aggresive and rude and diskomerit can be agressiv and rude and bucthers can be aggresive and rude but i cant respond to it?
this was over untill quoad brought it up again.
this poem SPOKE TO ME TAR! It spoke to me.
This makes me extremely happy
My talents have touched a life today 
Blagsta
Minimum cage, maximum cage
you've been a right cunt to soj
sheothebudworths
Up the bum - no babies!!!
I'm not gonna reply anymore but, fwiw, I don't reckon there's a SINGLE person here that'd want anything more than to see you well, Meth.
And NO ONE on this thread has done anything other than try to be helpful to you....soj and mrs q, most of all, have put a shitload of thought into their replies to you, too....not to insult you at all...JUST to help.
And NO ONE on this thread has done anything other than try to be helpful to you....soj and mrs q, most of all, have put a shitload of thought into their replies to you, too....not to insult you at all...JUST to help.
FridgeMagnet
Administrator
No, you. You have been extremely rude. It wasn't her being rude to herself, it was you. Stop making excuses.
Maybe you didn't mean to be rude but got caught up in the heat of the moment, or you didn't realise it was so rude, or you meant it at the time but now you think it was out of order, or hey maybe you did mean to be that rude. (I wouldn't advise taking that latter course.) But whatever it was, it was you that did it, and the more you blame your every reaction that anyone thinks is out of order on others rather than take responsibility for it yourself, the more everyone is going to think "bullshit".
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