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It's only as daft as white people talking about rock n' roll or soul or jazz or reggae. Which may or may not be daft, but you wouldn't get pulled up for it. Also, being black British and being from say... Hull wouldn't qualify you to be more of hip-hop expert than a white kid from say.... The Bronx. Quite the opposite.

I'll be back with more of the bleeding obvious later.
 
Disjecta Membra said:
I'll bite, So black people shouldn't play or listen to or talk about, Classical music,Country,Folk etc etc actually if cultures don't borrow evolve then whites shouldn't ride horses, eat potatoes......... I dunno fill in whatever. The whole whites can't talk about hip hops been done and died on hip hop forums years ago(well nearly) I maybe a Wigger but most the black people I know, know fuck all bout Huey p, Malcolm Or martin histories universal and most don't give a fuck bout history anyway.
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I'm not a wigga...

I'm a hiphop head...

as far as I'm aware it's not about a tone of skin (well unless you're dead pres...;)) it's about an affinity and an extension of community and the sentiment which goes along with it... pretty much all hiphop artists are at some point discussing how this is a bridge that the cultural references are from all cultures...

the only people who promote such arguments as it's a black music form or a white music form are racists...

besides if you're going down that route Kool Herc is a Jamaican so it's not a Black thing but a Jamaican thing...

but to quote skinny

Nobody round here is gonna be relaxin'
And this ain't no whites or a blacks thing
It's if you're livin in the council flats
up on tha brrrap ting
They got us on a lab rat thing
And it's funny to me how easily we're all adapting

Also where does Dan the Automator or El-p fit in to this it's a black music form argument... both seminal leaders of hiphop
 
METH LAB said:
no i didnt, she did
but she's older and wiser so no porblem? she says i mean fuck all to her so whats the problem? the only problem is a bunch of people that are attempting ,in vain i might add, to do my head in.

but if you go back to page one..and read all the way from page 1 to here...you will see who's got fuckin talant and who hassant. and since at least 80% of the poems/songs/raps on here are mine... well that kinda says it.

some people come in with a paragraph, maybe 2. but never a full verse really...couple have but once at that....and like i told you, i dont give a fuck.
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I was quoting your post 718.

You brought s**'s name up again for no reason.

I've read the whole thread, It's clear who is acting like a spoilt, attention seeking twat yet again. :facepalm::facepalm:

As for talent, I wouldn't say you had much at all. The "poems" are painful and dull to read, in this thread I only managed to read one all the way through. I think you have written 80% of the poems here because you have nothing better to do than be out of your head on speed and type random crap. Didn't you even put one of your poems in the writing thread because until this massive bum fight virtually no one bothered to look here?

You can prove me wrong when you're famous for your skills! :D
 
Aimed at Garf ^^^^
I did'nt know you were into hip hop we're few and far between on here i feel. My point was that we are all just humans and culture is global. I describe myself as a hip hop head but the wigger bit is just a legacy after years on hip hop forums, just a self deprecating remnant.
 
Those blacks should be getting cussed by all the latinos they nicked their percussion off for all the early hip-hop tracks. Or am I imagining all those Puerto Rican salsa instruments on early Bronx rap? Or maybe Afrika Bambaata wants to cough up some royalties to the Germans?

There you go. Only Germans and Puerto Ricans are allowed to talk about hip-hop. That's quite a statement.
 
I'mma take yo life
when I stab ya with my knife
gonna make you bleed
cause of your greed
die die
no more lies
gonna rip out your skull and fuck you in the eyes.

Word.
 
Favelado said:
I've been having a look round for a few weeks. Urban seems like a great site in general. Broadly left-wing, Brixton-centric with some excellent music threads and a weighty back catalogue of stuff to flick through on a slow afternoon. In general it's literate too.

I'm happy to engage with that. Hopefully, this can be a little home for me on the internet.

You are clearly a different kettle of fish. You can't string a sentence together. This maybe due to some kind of condition such as dyslexia or whatever. However, you're clearly thick on top of that. You should be glad you have some kind of condition because you at least have an occasional mask for your low IQ. You think you're engaged in "in depth" debate, but you seem only capable of knee-jerk emotive responses and missing the point of what others say. You also seem widely despised.

I hope that's specific enough for you. I wouldn't want to be "glibe".

We won't be arguing further in the future. This will cover everything.
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hint when lumpy and dumbdred agree with you you're well in the wrong....

just for reference like...

you seem quick to attack, judgemental, inconsistant, aggro and clearly wrong...

you should fit right in...

but we'll see... personally I doubt you'll be here in a years time...

come to the drinks....

then we'll see son...
 
GarfieldLeChat said:
then you'll never dun noe...

will ya...

like i said you'll not be here in the year...

seen em come seen em go...
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I live a few thousand kilometres away from the East End. That's the only thing stopping me. It looks like I'm missing out BIG TIME here, but destiny is strange and wondrous. Maybe I will get to meet you one day.

Just imagine that. It's something to get out of bed for in the morning in the meantime.
 
Favelado said:
I live a few thousand kilometres away from the East End. That's the only thing stopping me. It looks like I'm missing out BIG TIME here, but destiny is strange and wondrous. Maybe I will get to meet you one day.

Just imagine that. It's something to get out of bed for in the morning in the meantime.
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That was quite poetic!
 
Dandred said:
Fuck me you're pathetic Garth.
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like some little lick spittle hanging on the coat tails of others peering round going yeeeerrrrr like you you mean....

dude won't meet people from here can't see what their like IRL then makes massive leaps and assumptions about them....

like you in fact...

so who's the pathetic one? the one wailing into the night about others they've never met and aren't likely to....

who assume that come to the drinks is in some way an offer outside...

let's look at those posters who've stuck it out and not drifted are they the ones who've bonded and got to know each other lived in each others pockets, loved, laughed, partyed together or the ones who stay on the outside looking in being bitter, aloof and fuckwitted like you son...

yeah being socail with other urbans with in the community that's pathetic, what a waste of time going out and meeting people... much better to be a waste of skin like you on the net sniping isn't it...

you fucking clown shoes....
 
Dandred said:
Fuck me you're pathetic Garth.
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he's really not. He's intenigent, a good human being, stayin right with his girl after she got sick, perhaps to his own detrement to continued writing of of music.. he had to do what was right so he proggrams computers(i think) to make sure the bills get paid and food on the table.

Alot of people would be "fuck that im leaving my sick girlfreind coz i wanna be able to do my own thing..not the right thing" .. although alot of people dunno what the right thing is.

i only met him once and i was outta my tree.. psychotic awake all the bloody time and looking like a fukin idiot in a neon green trackey and sniffing plate sized lines of methamphetamine. I didnt really realise at the time that i put him in an awkward possition, he has a history of amphet dependance and i said he could have as much is he wanted... i should never have done that but was too off my box to realise.. i remember him pausing..thinking about it... but he rose above a craving. He also rapped circles round me and made me feel pathetic :D but he a good guy with good morals and a high IQ is fuckin obvious, esepcially if youve met him. Ide like to meet him again now im more stable.

And for whoever it was that said im still on the wizz..guess again bitch im over 4 and a half years clean...except maybe one or 2 lapses a year, just a little weekend and 2 weeks to recover. but for the most part, that addiction is gone.. i got nothing for it, no help, attempted suicde coz no amount of booze,downers, weed etc.. would fill the gap that gets left after a long speed habit. the first 3 years were fuckin awefull i never thought the constant cravings and dreams would stop.. but they did..due to a couple of lapses that reminded me that despite the magic high(if you got the real thing it really is fuckin awesome), once youve dne 24 hours and missed that first night of sleep, its paranoia knocking at ya door..but you wont wanna come down if hooked.. paranoia gets hit with benzo's and vodka, your still spychotic but you dont care..there is a risk here that you might go out with a weapon and hurt people that you think are on your case... i never did, but i wanted to...i walked into bnq hearing voices and bought an 18 inch chainsaw, no questions asked.. petrol powerd. only i couldant set it up right, if i had ide be dead coz one time i was trying to fire it up i fell onto it.. but i hadant put it together proper so i was ok physically, but mentally i was gonna go outside with that thing and kill the neighbour coz i thought he was fuckin my missis. i was just delirius and psychotic..it get so bad i went from acute psychosis periods to full blown chronic psychosis... but when your in that type of psychosis you thnk its real, you dont think your halucinating at all.. i remember one time finding s14ns terry pratchet books and thinking they were witch craft and that there was a lot between her and her ex and the governemnt t moniter my behaviour..i went stamping up the stairs saying "i have proof now at last" .."proof of what?" she says... a pull out a bart simpson sock beliving it to contain a shed load of 'evidance' about a non-existant conspiracy and threat to my life.

the sock is still pinned to the kitchen wall...for a laugh like lol.

im off my own topic anyway and goin to the pub

peace to the peacefull
 
Favelado said:
I live a few thousand kilometres away from the East End. That's the only thing stopping me. It looks like I'm missing out BIG TIME here, but destiny is strange and wondrous. Maybe I will get to meet you one day.

Just imagine that. It's something to get out of bed for in the morning in the meantime.
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it's bin dun before... people have come from aus hong kong new zeland USA etc... all totally possible ...
 
I got more bitches
than chickenpox has itches
sleazy hos
easy blows
I'm a mother fuckin pimp and everybody knows!

So don't fuck with me if you want to live
Get in my face and I'll greet ya with my shiv
I'm a bad mother fucker named bop-it-tee
and ain't no fuckin losers better mess with me!
 
Boppity said:
I got more bitches
than chickenpox has itches
sleazy hos
easy blows
I'm a mother fuckin pimp and everybody knows!

So don't fuck with me if you want to live
Get in my face and I'll greet ya with my shiv
I'm a bad mother fucker named bop-it-tee
and ain't no fuckin losers better mess with me!
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stop stealing lyrics from MIA forcoming release

:D
 
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