glued the envelope down, posted it back to myself, and sat like a meercat underneath my letter box for days on end...
I nearly choked on my coffee at that
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I nearly choked on my coffee at that
YouSir
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Sounds like the words of someone who knows very little about poetry to be honest. Or Rap for that matter, if you're convinced the skills are wholly transferable without any alterations for form. And it's all gone to shit because it's become a thread devoted to you and your arguments from what I can see, but as I'm not making that any better I'll drop out here.
e2a: Only went for the alert on my post, thread's doing quite well now apparently, so I take that last part back.
Swelling feet with pulsating beat sweating into vapour
Degrees of heat insulating in sheet, humidity and salt to savour
The air tasted stale. Not fit to drink, but drink it you must to launder
Ninety percent water. Cough up the damp rust, spit out the polluted traitor.
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So fucking hot my brains have stopped working.
Degrees of heat insulating in sheet, humidity and salt to savour
The air tasted stale. Not fit to drink, but drink it you must to launder
Ninety percent water. Cough up the damp rust, spit out the polluted traitor.
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So fucking hot my brains have stopped working.
Why bring s** into this again?
You made this fucked up situation from the start.
no i didnt, she did
but she's older and wiser so no porblem? she says i mean fuck all to her so whats the problem? the only problem is a bunch of people that are attempting ,in vain i might add, to do my head in.
but if you go back to page one..and read all the way from page 1 to here...you will see who's got fuckin talant and who hassant. and since at least 80% of the poems/songs/raps on here are mine... well that kinda says it.
some people come in with a paragraph, maybe 2. but never a full verse really...couple have but once at that....and like i told you, i dont give a fuck.
nope
dammit! i went like wild fire copy/pasting them into me note pad and you dont even delete it lol...you big bloody editor you
peace boss
i kinda do actually... stuck in a victim mentallity..but im getting there..learning on the way to be more positive.
thats why none of this shit bothers me anymore..it would of in the past, but not now....there aint nothing you can say or do to me that crystal meth and booze aint allreay done.
peace
TruXta
tired
Ah well. Hope you have a good weekend, and stay off the booze.
butchersapron
Bring back hanging
I hope everyone using some form of juvenile doggrel as a claimed self-therapy and as an excuse to homophobically and otherwise abuse other posters has a good weekend.
butchersapron
Bring back hanging
Some nice liberal hand washing there. Allied with a priestly forgiving of someone for something they did to someone else.TruXta said:
TruXta
tired
Oh, my. That hurt. It really did. You big strong man you.
cesare
shady's dreams ♥
TruXta
tired
Too right
It's now a pity competition thread
I think butcher's already ruled himself out.
cesare
shady's dreams ♥
Favelado
J'adore South Shore
Please. Also a hug. I'm very fragile.
cesare
shady's dreams ♥
TruXta
tired
You think I was being patronising? Honest question, I could well have been.
LOL *sigh*
really
if all you got is homophobia trot
then ya down to ya last, homophobic i am not
but its all you fuckin got
so just keep 'em comming
but they have no effect on me,
no nothing
..............
ide really like to punch you in the face BA (lol).
but i dont need to i'll just do it like this
is it a bird or a plane?
you gonna call me insane?
is it it poetry or rap?
maybe a bit of both... and your crap.
my violant stylings
from my writings
allow my anger
to keep me from the slammer
to flow through channels
blocked up energy pathways from too much poison
you aint nothing to anyone, you dont even annoy them
lol.
really
if all you got is homophobia trot
then ya down to ya last, homophobic i am not
but its all you fuckin got
so just keep 'em comming
but they have no effect on me,
no nothing
..............
ide really like to punch you in the face BA (lol).
but i dont need to i'll just do it like this
is it a bird or a plane?
you gonna call me insane?
is it it poetry or rap?
maybe a bit of both... and your crap.
my violant stylings
from my writings
allow my anger
to keep me from the slammer
to flow through channels
blocked up energy pathways from too much poison
you aint nothing to anyone, you dont even annoy them
lol.
cesare
shady's dreams ♥
cesare
shady's dreams ♥
whatever you want.
you see this >>><<< thats me
A pity competition and a doggerel bank
Homophobic abuse is a load of OL wank.
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TruXta
tired
Yes. Fair play if you did it on purpose
I didn't.
So much for my much vaunted self-insight. Damn you! *shakes fist*- Status
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