Also, apologies to Diatribe for the hazing. It's pretty normal for newcomers to get roughed up a bit, especially those who leap in with loud opinionated declarations. Don't take it personally, it's not you, it's us.
Also, if this really is the way they write naturally and it's not as affected and laboured as it seems, then I guess we'll just have to get used to it. Maybe they're a steampunk. Isn't this the way steampunks talk? All faux-Victorian? So maybe were out of order for attacking a cultural characteristic, or an inadvertent personal foible. I'll back off on the delivery.
I hope the content improves though.
Thanks, don't worry about it, I understand the ground rules.