Without giving anything away to Soj, my feeling is that if you though the beginning was good and then it lost it badly, don't you think there might have been some intent with that? Does somebody suddenly become a worse writer midway through a book or is something else going on?
I'll save the rest for when she finishes it
btw - sorry for being a bit abrasive about it, the book means a lot to me (family loss thing) so i'm probably overly protective.You're still wrong, though
I'm ALMOST finished - had to stop reading midway through Mistakes, cos I was rushing it, but - fuck it - my thoughts so far:
It's like he took every idea about post-modernist literary theory and then turned it into a novel. It’s self-referential, loaded with cultural references (including cult of celebrity), contains internal monologues, employs irony (with attempts to debunk in what I’ve read so far of Mistakes), shows and tells, stories within a story, multiple genres, refusal to provide closure, denouement – apart from telling of when the Might mag closes – this is pretty much the only ‘comfort’ provided by a traditional denouement. Christ, not even the parents’ death gets denouement – apart from the cremains, later – won’t spoil that for other readers.
Memoir as genre (a self-selecting genre) – the first half gets the reader to suspend disbelief, IDENTIFY with certain situations (I did, as a parent, as a survivor of trauma), the second half proves his status as unreliable narrator, shows the reader that they were wrong to suspend disbelief, shows fact can be fiction . Toph’s out of character speech re Adam Rich (breaking out of ‘character’) – loved the whole Real Worlds satire
What is the start of the 2nd half to me. The MTV interview – cracked me up. Loved the way he starts breaking down what you thought was ‘true’.
Love the last words of the main text
Love how he shows how the story doesn’t HAVE to make sense
Also loved the ‘Begun 1998’ ‘Let go 2000’ – STILL no closure, not giving you that
Jesus – this probably doesn’t make much sense, but it’s got me buzzing and my ideas are all over the shop. Like I said, I could write a fucking dissertation on this book
Will finish Mistakes tomorrow and then come back if I have anything more to say - cos err, I realise I've rambled on quite a bit here