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sojourner said:
And you then, presumably.

I wanted to put forward my perspective on all of this, given that I am one of the 2 people involved. Would you deny me that, Garf?

And is that an implied threat? I believe you already did 'take sides' - certainly reads that way to me.
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as I've said to both of you; you are blowing up something which need not be blown up.

he should have been more grateful for the effort put in you shouldn't have started name calling at someone with a history of manic episodes who was likely to react.

everything else afterwards is just additional sorties.

now you're trying to pick a fight with me when all I've done is bang your heads together and say behave...

but fine act aggrieved that someone is telling you both to calm down and be reasonable.

says more about you than you nonsensical claims of being denied a voice (no ones censoring you are they).

take my being able to wipe both of you of the planet in terms of poetry or lyrical dexterity and having had acres more success at it as a threat if you want but then as you're intent appears to turn anything into a slight and build a granite mole hill it's hardly surprising...

6 of 1 half a dozen of the other...

if you hadn't fired the first shot then it wouldn't have been returned you can't then complain the other side had artillery... you offence is at the reaction to the offence caused by you... which is ludicrous in the extreme...

you're both clearly nutters... :D
 
GarfieldLeChat said:
as I've said to both of you; you are blowing up something which need not be blown up.

he should have been more grateful for the effort put in you shouldn't have started name calling at someone with a history of manic episodes who was likely to react.

everything else afterwards is just additional sorties.

now you're trying to pick a fight with me when all I've done is bang your heads together and say behave...

but fine act aggrieved that someone is telling you both to calm down and be reasonable.

says more about you than you nonsensical claims of being denied a voice (no ones censoring you are they).

take my being able to wipe both of you of the planet in terms of poetry or lyrical dexterity and having had acres more success at it as a threat if you want but then as you're intent appears to turn anything into a slight and build a granite mole hill it's hardly surprising...

6 of 1 half a dozen of the other...

if you hadn't fired the first shot then it wouldn't have been returned you can't then complain the other side had artillery... you offence is at the reaction to the offence caused by you... which is ludicrous in the extreme...

you're both clearly nutters... :D
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Garf - I am calm. You are starting to sound quite patronising though. I'm not trying to pick a fight with you, merely responding. But again, you are responding back by telling me that my point of view is somehow less than yours.

If you had taken one bit of notice of my long post earlier you would recognise that I was severely pushed - and that I tried extremely hard to maintain patience in light of that. Actually I don't think you HAVE read my post, given your penultimate sentence.
 
sojourner said:
Garf - I am calm. You are starting to sound quite patronising though. I'm not trying to pick a fight with you, merely responding. But again, you are responding back by telling me that my point of view is somehow less than yours.

If you had taken one bit of notice of my long post earlier you would recognise that I was severely pushed - and that I tried extremely hard to maintain patience in light of that. Actually I don't think you HAVE read my post, given your penultimate sentence.
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nothing to do with it.

ultimately is this going to affect your life.

will you not breath or eat or love or laugh or write poetry again as a result of it?

the answers no.

you put effort in to encourage someones artistic actions, that's a good thing.

you did however also call them names. own that. it's yours.

he did name call back. he's clearly owning that. it's his.

he did apologise. I, even, in a pm to my friend said he should as he was making himself look stupid and he was being rude after recieving help. which he acknoldged.

then a mob turns up whinging that it's not good enough so he apologises again and sends you a pm.

the mob unhappy with this demand more he apologises on the thread you then take umberidge all over again and lo and behold we're right back to square 1.

either you accept his apology or you don't.

usually adults move on at this point.

if you chose not to or want to have hang over issues don't accept his apology and look graceless and petty as a result. that's how not accepting an apology works it blows up both people.

they have to have the good grace to apologise you have to have the good grace to accept...

without this then it's just a feud...

which seems to be what you both want...

maybe you should both bone each other sort out the tension that way.

either way you're now both covering yourselves and each other in shit and it's not pretty.

if telling you this is in some way diminishing your point then maybe that's because the point isn't worth making over a bit of poetry on a bulletin board for godsakes...

christ both of you let it go...

frankly it's like watching two peacocks fight...
 
Sirena said:
Just in case anyone thinks this line is witty and original, it's been taken from an Eminem tune....
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:D

I do nick the odd line... been honest about that from the start.

Sooo, since i nicked it.. am i still homophobic? or was it Mr.Mathers being homophobic? or is homophobic just a bull shit word to make people out to be bad people when really its kinda a last resort thing when they know they aint getting anywhere so pull out the race card or the homophoia card?

look, ive put over 5000 words on this thread and yea i have borroed the odd line... nobody else is doing much of anything except bangin on about soj. you ALL need to grow the fuck up..im supposed to be the paranoid nut job... take a look at yaselves ffs your like i was 7 years ago... nuts and pricks!
 
No, I deny that I look 'graceless and petty'. I stand by refusing the apology based on the grounds I have already mentioned in detail.

I do not want a feud. What I wanted was to state my perspective on what has happened. A torrent of abuse was hurled at me in my absence. I considered ignoring it, but then decided to respond, just to put it to bed. You have continued to respond to me. Anyone would think you wanted the last word, or something.

I did wonder if the apology was the result of an external pressure, thanks for confirming that.

That really is all I've got to say.
 
GarfieldLeChat said:
nothing to do with it.

ultimately is this going to affect your life.

will you not breath or eat or love or laugh or write poetry again as a result of it?

the answers no.

you put effort in to encourage someones artistic actions, that's a good thing.

you did however also call them names. own that. it's yours.

he did name call back. he's clearly owning that. it's his.

he did apologise. I, even, in a pm to my friend said he should as he was making himself look stupid and he was being rude after recieving help. which he acknoldged.

then a mob turns up whinging that it's not good enough so he apologises again and sends you a pm.

the mob unhappy with this demand more he apologises on the thread you then take umberidge all over again and lo and behold we're right back to square 1.

either you accept his apology or you don't.

usually adults move on at this point.

if you chose not to or want to have hang over issues don't accept his apology and look graceless and petty as a result. that's how not accepting an apology works it blows up both people.

they have to have the good grace to apologise you have to have the good grace to accept...

without this then it's just a feud...

which seems to be what you both want...

maybe you should both bone each other sort out the tension that way.

either way you're now both covering yourselves and each other in shit and it's not pretty.

if telling you this is in some way diminishing your point then maybe that's because the point isn't worth making over a bit of poetry on a bulletin board for godsakes...

christ both of you let it go...

frankly it's like watching two peacocks fight...
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i allready let it go garf... im not troubled in the slightest that was an exellant point btw.

if she wont take the apology... what can i do? i offer out more..she wont have it *shrug*

peace
 
sojourner said:
No, I deny that I look 'graceless and petty'. I stand by refusing the apology based on the grounds I have already mentioned in detail.

I do not want a feud. What I wanted was to state my perspective on what has happened. A torrent of abuse was hurled at me in my absence. I considered ignoring it, but then decided to respond, just to put it to bed. You have continued to respond to me. Anyone would think you wanted the last word, or something.

I did wonder if the apology was the result of an external pressure, thanks for confirming that.

That really is all I've got to say.
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it wassant from external presure at all

torrent of abuse? i aint even in first gear
 
i gotta better things to do and more important things to do anyways so im off for a while you can keep moaining like a baby soj or just admit that your old and not wise at all and that a poem named 'walk to the shops' is pathetic

they be wanting you for the mcdolandls ad next lol

fuck off!
 
METH LAB said:
if she wont take the apology... what can i do?
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Leave it, if you ARE genuinely sorry, and never f***ing mention it again :D

tbh, I've got a lot of time for a grizzled, old, alkie, addictions counsellor colleague of mine, who - when someone who was drug / alcohol dependent apologised to him - would say 'don't say sorry, just never fucking do it again.'

Like, insulting someone some more because they wouldn't accept that you genuinely regretted insulting them in the first place is... yeah :D

Saying sorry is cheap. Living sorry is fucking hard.
 
sojourner said:
No, I deny that I look 'graceless and petty'. I stand by refusing the apology based on the grounds I have already mentioned in detail.

I do not want a feud. What I wanted was to state my perspective on what has happened. A torrent of abuse was hurled at me in my absence. I considered ignoring it, but then decided to respond, just to put it to bed. You have continued to respond to me. Anyone would think you wanted the last word, or something.

I did wonder if the apology was the result of an external pressure, thanks for confirming that.

That really is all I've got to say.
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christ on a pogo...

it's a conversation where you've asked me a question would you deny me a chance to put forward my perspective in response. ;)

come on now both of you have talent in this area can we not just let the art talk for itself???
 
METH LAB said:
i gotta better things to do and more important things to do anyways so im off for a while you can keep moaining like a baby soj or just admit that your old and not wise at all and that a poem named 'walk to the shops' is pathetic

they be wanting you for the mcdolandls ad next lol

fuck off!
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Pack it in, will you? You're just being spiteful and nasty. I know you've got problems, but ffs .....
 
mrs quoad said:
Leave it, if you ARE genuinely sorry, and never f***ing mention it again :D

tbh, I've got a lot of time for a grizzled, old, alkie, addictions counsellor colleague of mine, who - when someone who was drug / alcohol dependent apologised to him - would say 'don't say sorry, just never fucking do it again.'

Like, insulting someone some more because they wouldn't accept that you genuinely regretted insulting them in the first place is... yeah :D

Saying sorry is cheap. Living sorry is fucking hard.
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i aint like most people.. something wrong with me like lol

but i kinda enjoy it, i guess thats too damn bad

peace
 
ElizabethofYork said:
Pack it in, will you? You're just being spiteful and nasty. I know you've got problems, but ffs .....
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i'll pack it in when a fuckin mod says so and not b4 ya hear me bitch!

you people dont effect me. you think you do..but you fuckin dont.

10 years of high-purity amphet/crystal M and you know what its like to be scared.. you lot compared to that is like stepping on ants
 
meth if you started this thread as a rap thing, I'll MC for a sec, everyone sing after me, when i say face you say palm, FACE,PALM,FACE,PALM.
 
METH LAB said:
all i did was say s**
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Exactly!

'All'!

ffs :D

"All I did was repeatedly batter a bees nest with a flaming rag on a stick, shouting "COME ON YOU MOTHERFUCKING BEES COME ON COME ON COME ON YOU FUCKING FUCKERS" and would you believe it, those f***ing bees..."

FFS, man.
 
Disjecta Membra said:
meth if you started this thread as a rap thing, I'll MC for a sec, Sing after me, when i say face you say palm, FACE,PALM,FACE,PALM.
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*sigh*

i started it as a fuckin.. aww jesus you people have zero IQ

if you aint gonna read the fuckin posts dont bother posting

i allready said over and over that its for poems, raps, songs, anything with artistic lyrics

but you dont seem to be able to read
 
mrs quoad said:
Exactly!

'All'!

ffs :D

"All I did was repeatedly batter a bees nest with a flaming rag on a stick, shouting "COME ON YOU MOTHERFUCKING BEES COME ON COME ON COME ON YOU FUCKING FUCKERS" and would you believe it, those f***ing bees..."

FFS, man.
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hey, she the one who is all big and clever..go back and read her venom. she's crying over this.. if she so much better and wiser than me what the fuck she come back for? she cant even write one bloody sentance.. soj is crap..her writing is absolute tripe.. its nothing, its less than nothing. its worse than less than the worst of nothing could ever possibly be.

find one poem from soj on here... you wont, coz she cant do any.
 
METH LAB said:
Sooo, since i nicked it.. am i still homophobic? or was it Mr.Mathers being homophobic? or is homophobic just a bull shit word to make people out to be bad people when really its kinda a last resort thing when they know they aint getting anywhere so pull out the race card or the homophoia card?
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Jesus Christ, this really is fucking appalling.
 
meth dude you're devaluing you own points now even if they won't you should just stick to the poems... innit... one of you needs to be the better person... or you can both be the bitter persons...
 
METH LAB said:
Blah blah blah
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Pffft.

There's no debate whatsoever, Meth - you absolutely kickstarted this hornet's nest, there was the square root of fuck all reason to do so.

It was quiet, dead, and peaceful before you kicked it all off again. By naming and flaming someone who you knew was likely to be irritated (and understandably so) by your choosing to namecheck her.

The rest?

Blah.
 
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mrs quoad said:
Pffft.

There's no debate whatsoever, Meth - you absolutely kickstarted this hornet's nest, there was the square root of fuck all reason to do so.

It was quiet, dead, and peaceful before you kicked it all off again. By naming and flaming someone who you knew was likely to be irritated (and understandably so) by your choosing to namecheck her.

The rest?

Blah.
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no she said she was older and wiser andcould rise above it...but has she done that? no
 
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