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tower bridge at dawn

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The problem with sticky threads is that because they're always there, I completely ignore them. I recently posted a seperate thread with a critique request, when I could have just posted it in this thread. Oops!
 
This is my first time posting for criticism so be gentle.

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I do like that slow motion water movement thing and you seem to have got it down nicely. However, I would probably have photographed more of the water with less of the land above it personally, and on the second photo I would have made it slightly more obvious what the object is (I think it is a candle in a holder?).
 
Hi

I do like that slow motion water movement thing and you seem to have got it down nicely. However, I would probably have photographed more of the water with less of the land above it personally, and on the second photo I would have made it slightly more obvious what the object is (I think it is a candle in a holder?).

Yeah, a lot of my photos are like that first one. I'm trying to work more on the story/composition that I want in my photos.

For the second, I was learning the macro function on my lens. I knew that I wanted a more abstract feel though. I guess that doesn't come across so well.
 
I don't think i'm any great shakes with the camera, but every so often I get a picture I quite like:

York Minster
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Midday in Hampshire
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It's nothing fancy, but I really like this photo of my dad and Uncle fishing. Any suggestions on how to improve it? I would like to get it properly printed.

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It's nothing fancy, but I really like this photo of my dad and Uncle fishing. Any suggestions on how to improve it? I would like to get it properly printed.

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Nice photo all that needs is a straight horizon. Should be easy to do in photo editing software.
 
A few for (gentle) critisism, all part of my first attempt at some semi-serious wildlife photography:

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Duiker Antelope
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Secretary Bird
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Rock Aguana
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Final one I know is not a great shot - but it is such an unusual animal it ends up as my favorite of the bunch:

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(It's an Aardwolf btw)

All taken on a Nikon D90 with 70-300mm VR handheld.
 
REAL photographers are beyond criticism. Their photos make you criticize yourself.

(nice nature shots btw... colour balance seems a bit too warm, could be my monitor though)
 
Hi, I've not posted in this forum before but I've worked up the courage to submit a couple of pictures. I took them with just a shitty little compact so they're not great but I quite like them anyway! I've just bought a second hand dslr so am looking forward to gettin into more techie stuff soon!

This is a view over the old town, Dubrovnik
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Kayaks
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And a couple of photos from sunny South London
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