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Still new to Photography and Photoshop

One of my first attempts at a "proper" photo rather than a snapshot also my first proper play with photoshop

criticism most welcome but go easy :)
 
Boris Sprinkler said:
Gulfoss, Island.

lovely - its a beautiful place, i was there a few years ago with my 3mp that i scrimped and saved for



and now my first attempt at flash photography, its taken with a d70, a manual 50mm lens that i just bought and i have been messing with off camera flash... feedback or advice on what you look for in potraits would be very much appreciated

 
chintz said:
One of my first attempts at a "proper" photo rather than a snapshot also my first proper play with photoshop

criticism most welcome but go easy :)

i think thats great, all the more so for a first attempt, i must tell you tho that me likeing it may not mean a lot as i am a sucker for landscapes, the more cheese the better.. i loves them....:)
 
e19896 said:
from me new toy taken tonight moveing home 16 2 07 but going to play over the weekend..
gleadless.jpg

I like that. The way the houses in the foreground blend to mist and then then to the lights further out, it makes a busy place look still. What Roald Dahl would have called the witching hour. ;)
 
Baffled...

This is simply an exercise in taking a fairly simple, semi-abstract shot then doing a bit of PS work with tightening the crop, upping the saturation a bit and then bumping up the contrast. I shoved it up on Flickr (forlornly hoping for some critical input!) and have got the usual ego stroke for what, in retrospect, is just an okayish sort of image...so do feel free to rip it apart, it would be a refreshing change!

http://www.flickr.com/photos/daveamis/379655337/

This one was the closest I could zoom in on the pylon with the camera I've got. I've been trying out a few pylon shots with the aim of getting something with a gritty but abstract quality. Looking back at many of them, they are okay but nothing to write home about. I feel that with this one, I may be getting there but could do with some pointers as to how to improve it. Also, would a mono version be worth a try?

http://www.flickr.com/photos/daveamis/370976219/

Cheers and thanks (in advance) for any feedback...
 
I really don't get it - you're almost like a troll but I can't quite decide if you are :D

The name, the stuff, how you behave - you're up on the roof with a banner, screaming 'pisstake!' but I worry it's not at all.
 
Stanley Edwards said:
You're just teaseling now :rolleyes:

You're still shyte IMO :D

Each to their own. Thankfully.

and who made you god and each to there own i know what ill ban meself from urban75 good bye..
 
mauvais said:
I really don't get it - you're almost like a troll but I can't quite decide if you are :D

The name, the stuff, how you behave - you're up on the roof with a banner, screaming 'pisstake!' but I worry it's not at all.

*scans for evidence*

Nope. You right. He's a troll.
 
e19896 said:
and who made you god and each to there own i know what ill ban meself from urban75 good bye..


Oi! Idiot. How about slagging some of my photography in your defence instead of just fucking off?

I'd like that. :) Oh I would. I'd love it.
 
Stanley Edwards said:
Oi! Idiot. How about slagging some of my photography in your defence instead of just fucking off?

I'd like that. :) Oh I would. I'd love it.

i hope you are not being serious and just incase you are i have reported this post as all of this is becoming abuse..
 
Honest question to help me understand where you're coming from - why's your website called pretentiousartist?
 
e19896 said:
i hope you are not being serious and just incase you are i have reported this post as all of this is becoming abuse..


YOU FAT USELESS BUNCH OF LARDY GAY PULP.


I have dirt on the mods - they'll never ban me ;)


Get a fucking grip man. It's art and it's the internet :D
 
e19896 said:
yes one is very much so read the blog there..

Do you're down with the kids talking style. It's far more entertaining.

Is you as pissed as I am?

Bet you are :D

More bad pics please. You LOOOOOSER. :)
 
Stanley Edwards said:
Do you're down with the kids talking style. It's far more entertaining.

Is you as pissed as I am?

Bet you are :D

More bad pics please. You LOOOOOSER. :)

i do not drink reoprted againe for abuse..
 
e19896 said:
i do not drink reoprted againe for abuse..


Like I said before; I have the dirt on the mods - they'll never ban me (I hope, sort of, whatever).

I'm actually very good at abusive words. You don't want to read them.
 
Please start some thread elsewhere, this sticky is for posting up images and offering constructive criticism.

I suggest the following:
- limit to each individual adding only the occasional photo
- if you have nothing worth saying then say nothing

If you have a handful of photos you'd like to post then just start your own thread. And critics: silence can be loud, and has the advantage of saving the rest of us from listening to yet another bitch fest.
 
alef said:
Please start some thread elsewhere, this sticky is for posting up images and offering constructive criticism.

I suggest the following:
- limit to each individual adding only the occasional photo
- if you have nothing worth saying then say nothing

If you have a handful of photos you'd like to post then just start your own thread. And critics: silence can be loud, and has the advantage of saving the rest of us from listening to yet another bitch fest.



Mister sensible since he became a dad or what :p
 
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