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So this is what poetry is!
poetry competition?
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GarfieldLeChat
fucking awesome but wrong
sure, so I've just show you baseless attack on meth is nothing more than a baseless attack but I'm the one who needs to grow up...
a phrase you've only used because you've nothing else to say and you get easily offended by swearing...
well that's ironic cos your a cunt...
I wonder how anyone can be so blind as to see my comments as an attack. Oh, wait, it's Garf.....
why what you gonna do?
im armed to the teeth, how about you?
and when i say armed i say it in jest
im talking about my ammo in my poetry chest
youde do good t stop hitting at me
coz i really dont give a fuck, nope not me
so i ask again what the fuck you gonna do?
you dont know what the fuck ive been through
end it with another lyrical bat to ya back and knock you out flat.
you aint even rhyming, so what the fuck you on this thread for ya prat?
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GarfieldLeChat
fucking awesome but wrong
we do not.
I caught you behaving like a cunt
I called you a cunt
it became apparent you were a cunt to everyone else
who then called you a cunt
you were banned for being a cunt
you've zero friends
allies
or support
God only knows why you came back
you've continued in precisely the same cunt like manner with no grace or acknowledgeable of your cunt like behaviour or indeed any kind of amends...
because you're a cunt...
so cunt off...
hows that for a poem cunt?
no this is a certian somebody getting pissed off with me..ive apologised despite her being the initiater.
as for lock and light? he comes here telling me im this and that, when really he's the one being a twat.
i didnt de-rail this thread, i let it go and went back to what i was doing b4 shit hit the fan..now its come back around again..im not embarast im not botherd at all, i can rip the piss outta myself all day, im hardened to insults people say what they say...and i will to..now is this getting through to you? boo? what ya gonna do? tell ya what, i'll give you a screwdriver and a screw.. go play with them.. learn how to build a PC again.
(@L&L) I forgot who i was talking to then
has L&L had previous names?
Poor, pussy. Very poor.
i thought it was gock gock gocking great! lol
and i dont se you doing much lock and light
you aint even rhyming your just talking shite
LeChat would rap circles 'round both of us
but ide be a bigger challange coz my freestyles getting notorious!
gock gock gocking garf all the way
gock gock garf you gon and made my day
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lol peace!
Take another look at post 7 of this thread, Meth.
yea you did one.
and i liked it, ws hoping for more. but you aint got any more.
i just sit here and tap 'em out
freestyling at my keyboard is what im about
number 7 lol we up to 400 and you only done one!
gotta shoot now my dinners getting cold and the stake is over-done
Johnny Canuck3
Well-Known Member
It's sentences broken up funny.
Funny peculiar rather than funny ha-ha.
better than you though..you only done one on this entire thread and it wernt that good i just like it to try ad get more outta you lol.
it wassant that bad, but it wassant that good either.
tbh that welsh fella and chaz have been the best(except me) on this thread.
peace and puddings
Is your dinner not getting cold, Meth?
TruXta
tired
I quite enjoyed rory's. You should stop postin yours and start rapping it for real. Use soundcloud or something and link to that.
@L&L Regarding my dinner being cold
it was..ive eaten it now
rump stake, home grown runner beans, and a jacket spud with flora and cheese on.
yum yum it was to.
why exactly are you posting on this thread?
youve got nothing to show
no lyrics no flow
coming from your head
maybe go back to bed?
your fuckin pointless here
your doing nothing here
youve only posted one damn poem
which was ok but nothing special
i rhyme like red hot heavy metal
go ahead and touch it
you be scared for life whilst i bust it
you dont seem to do much of shit
your just here to be somones puppet
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go away
or stay
but if you stay
fucks sake rhyme something
coz at the moment you just in the way
telling me whats what?
you couldant tell a watch from a clock
or a clock from a fuckin cock
cum suck on mine an fuckin rot
at least diss me with 'some' attempt of the topic
maybe then you wont look so much of a cock prick
stating with one lines
that my thread is embarising times
well i dont fuckin care coz my shit rhymes
i can do it all day just to pas the times
maybe now i have ago at you
for being such a nob head i gota say fuck you
and i know you cant write shit you will probably hit me back
but if you do hit me back
it deffinataly wont be in the form of rap
it will be with something that dont even rhyme,
not one poxy line,
im getting tired of you lock and light
lock your doors coz i just won this fight
or leave them open for all i care
you dont really do anything... your just there.
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to say the least
it was..ive eaten it now
rump stake, home grown runner beans, and a jacket spud with flora and cheese on.
yum yum it was to.
why exactly are you posting on this thread?
youve got nothing to show
no lyrics no flow
coming from your head
maybe go back to bed?
your fuckin pointless here
your doing nothing here
youve only posted one damn poem
which was ok but nothing special
i rhyme like red hot heavy metal
go ahead and touch it
you be scared for life whilst i bust it
you dont seem to do much of shit
your just here to be somones puppet
.............................
go away
or stay
but if you stay
fucks sake rhyme something
coz at the moment you just in the way
telling me whats what?
you couldant tell a watch from a clock
or a clock from a fuckin cock
cum suck on mine an fuckin rot
at least diss me with 'some' attempt of the topic
maybe then you wont look so much of a cock prick
stating with one lines
that my thread is embarising times
well i dont fuckin care coz my shit rhymes
i can do it all day just to pas the times
maybe now i have ago at you
for being such a nob head i gota say fuck you
and i know you cant write shit you will probably hit me back
but if you do hit me back
it deffinataly wont be in the form of rap
it will be with something that dont even rhyme,
not one poxy line,
im getting tired of you lock and light
lock your doors coz i just won this fight
or leave them open for all i care
you dont really do anything... your just there.
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to say the least
You should learn to tell the difference between poetry and stream of conciousness, Meth.
and you should piss off unless your gonna join in
stream of conciousness = freestyle you fuckin idot.
TruXta
tired
Not what I meant - in fact I think most of what you write is really sound for a standard 4/4 rap beat. IMO really great rap takes liberties with the rhythm, goes counter the flow of the beat, in and out, sideways. That's when you really hear the roots of rap, going back to jazz, scat and griots long before that.
E2A: If you wanna practice different meters, just try and compose a rap/poem to a waltz - doesn't have to be an actual waltz, it's the 2/3rds rhythm that matters.
There is no need for that, Meth. Calm down, dear.
TruXta
tired
there plenty need for it
your just trying to wind me up and you know it
but i aint gonna take the bait
im allready better than you so no bait to take
calm down dear?
let me make this clear
i know im better than what you called me erlier
an embarisment? thats what you said dear
fuck yaself you cant here my beat
if you did you would be astonished coz my rhymings sweet
and not only that
i just shoot from the hip
no need to rehearse any fuckin verse
its all too easy
nobody has a go coz they kow they cant beat me
got abit of trouble with the rythem then yea
i put my hands up to that
i aint quite got the nack
like Dr.newbie on his first time rap
first time? he fuckin destroyed me
you dont see me getting annoyed B?
if he can do it then he can do it and he done it well
but i aint buying it was his first time, can just tell
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EZ as ya go.
peace
Not only are you "taking the bait", you are taking bait that isn't being offered. You decided to ressurect the quarrel with Soj. You did that, Meth, and that is what I have been responding to. BTW, I called this thread an embarrasment, not you.
Please yourself, Meth. I'm not going anywhere.
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