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I thought the story line could go somewhere better if they had a different lead.I though that messed up kid and his wifey/gf were pretty decent actors.It's a shame.Channel 4 drama would have done a better job with it.
 
Thought it would have worked better as a series - a three parter would have explored the themes in more depth. The character's arc seemed rushed to me - teacher, wrongly accused, convicted, mental breakdown, homeless, rescued through church, new girlfriend, new job, break-up, new job again, resolution. Waaaay to much to pack into an hour and a half.
 
brixtonvilla said:
Thought it would have worked better as a series - a three parter would have explored the themes in more depth. The character's arc seemed rushed to me - teacher, wrongly accused, convicted, mental breakdown, homeless, rescued through church, new girlfriend, new job, break-up, new job again, resolution. Waaaay to much to pack into an hour and a half.

I agree. It did all happen at a bit like break-neck speed from teaching to begging. I would have like to see it extended to two one hour slots. I thought it dealt with a potentially very prickly subject with great tact, thoughtfulness and balance, and (importantly) plenty of humour. While pointedly not fearing to address views on "the problem with black people", from made up forenames to the legacy of slavery, it also highlighted Joe's (the lead character) flawed self-righteousness.
The acting was excellent, especially the actress who played Heather, Joe's girlfriend.
 
I missed the crucial first 15 minutes, but watched the rest of it and thought it was good. But, yes, it would have benefited from being longer, as it tried to deal with so many things - I shed a little tear at the end, of course... I thought his moment of realisation was very powerful.
 
Iemanja said:
I missed the crucial first 15 minutes, but watched the rest of it and thought it was good. But, yes, it would have benefited from being longer, as it tried to deal with so many things - I shed a little tear at the end, of course... I thought his moment of realisation was very powerful.

Shed a little tear myself, brilliant acting allround and very entertaining. Agree that too much was crammed into 90 mins, a 3 parter would have been much better.
 
I enjoyed this and agree with others who say it would have benefited from being longer it felt like the the play had almost been written for the stage and little had been done to adapt this for TV.
 
Watched it for about 25 minutes and then turned the telly off as it was absolute arse. Terribly written, it seemed the writer was trying to pack in every issue she could think of. The lead actor was miscast and all.
 
Belushi said:
Watched it for about 25 minutes and then turned the telly off as it was absolute arse. Terribly written, it seemed the writer was trying to pack in every issue she could think of. The lead actor was miscast and all.

I nearly did the same, but decided that I might as well see it through to the bitter end. It did seem like a parade of cliches and stereotypes. At times it came across to me as being very American. You just knew there's be some kind of reconciliation in the end, and with some of the music I was very much reminded me of 'It's a Wonderful Life.' I thought it was ok, but it reminded me why I don't bother turning the telly on that often. Apparently, Radio 4 were waxing lyrical about it. Maybe I should have taken that as a warning.
 
Belushi said:
Watched it for about 25 minutes and then turned the telly off as it was absolute arse. Terribly written, it seemed the writer was trying to pack in every issue she could think of. The lead actor was miscast and all.

oh come on... the style wasn't original - the way the lead character exchanges knowing remarks to the viewer - but the subject was.

it was far, far more authentic then other black-focused dramas I've seen on tv before, which on the whole tend to be very laboured and crap.

i kept watching thinking, what else is the writer going to approach...
 
Divisive Cotton said:
it was far, far more authentic then other black-focused dramas I've seen on tv before, which on the whole tend to be very laboured and crap.

Do you think? I don't know what black-focussed dramas you've seen, but this seemed pretty laboured to me. Someone mentioned earlier that it was too short, and I would tend to agree. If it were longer there'd be a chance to make the characters in to something other than a parade of black stereotypes.
 
Crude, cartoony and looked as if it had been written for the stage and badly adapted. don't know why so much fuss was made about it. soliloquy to camera is a copout writing wise, that way of writing is so much easier than actually taking time to give depth and subtlety to your characters and plot.
 
It was ok and a pleasant enough watch, even though the ending became increasingly farcical.

It was trying to do far too much. All the Eastenders-style theatricals, combined with the 2d characters, made it far too predictable. It seemed almost a scattergun parody of 'black' stereotypes rather than a serious issue-led drama.
 
brixtonvilla said:
Thought it would have worked better as a series - a three parter would have explored the themes in more depth. The character's arc seemed rushed to me - teacher, wrongly accused, convicted, mental breakdown, homeless, rescued through church, new girlfriend, new job, break-up, new job again, resolution. Waaaay to much to pack into an hour and a half.

After the stick that the BBC and the writer got over this programme (much of which was without actually seeing it), i think a series - however short - might have been a bit far for the BBC to go.

It was filled with stereotypes, but then no more or no less than other programmes on tv recently, "black" or otherwise.
 
agricola said:
It was filled with stereotypes, but then no more or no less than other programmes on tv recently, "black" or otherwise.

yes, but as part of him bashing through his mental illness around blackness. I thought it was pretty good overall, but the execution was clunky in places.

I think it benefitted from being a single relatively short piece - the idea of facing up to these stereotypes and issues would have become very slow and turgid over a series of episodes.
 
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