Still shit though wasn't it? I mean, mine might have been shit, but at least I didn't call anyone a 'turd burglar' in it.
thing is you're was what structured, time taken, edited, reedited, amended revised etc etc etc and that's the best you could come up with....
that wasn't even a first draft, it was off the top of my head to prove that even in these circumstances someone just applying an average lexicon to their conversation could in under 3 minutes write something which was infinitely better than your refined works...
in my raw state mine was a rolls to your peddle car... imagine what it'd be if i tried and spent you know the time you did on yours on it...
see the old phrase you can't polish a turd is certainly true, well done for trying though....
care to post on topic now your concieted and self absorbed poerty skills have been shown up by a dyslexic with bahvioural issues and you've still not contributed one line of text on this thread approaching debate on the topic...
either that or your attempting to use the thread to publicse your third rate poetry skillz in which case are you for real...
HMMMM debate about a murder and miscarriage of justice it sounds like a job for shit poetry man...
Hi guys shit poetry man here i know you discuss some heavy shit what with the murdered girl, the miscarrage of justice the mental italian laws and the prosecutor who was nuts, but don't be like totally wak have some bargain basement not good enough to be remedial class poetry... that'll sort it out...
and it made sense, your mistake is to assume that it must all have a standard meter... which goes to show how little a poet you are...
